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Elaine Schoonover's avatar

It's good. Look at paragraph 5, "Bill didn't keep many personal affects to remember his late wife by." I think the word you were looking for was "effects". LOL Sorry, it's the proofreading part of me that notices. Still a good story!

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Kara's avatar

I’m hooked!

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